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thepapster Newb
Posts : 13 Join date : 2012-02-28 Age : 27 Location : U.S.A
| Subject: Crystal Mercer Fri Mar 30, 2012 11:33 pm | |
| Camp Norse:
Name: Crystal Mercer Age: 18 Gender: Female Eyes: Dark Blue Hair: Light Brown Height: 5'8 Body Type: Curvy Skin Color: Olive Norse God Parent: Tree Mortal Parent: Joseph Mercer Country of Origin: Norway Pets: Pumpkin the Kitty Talents: Good flexibility. Smart. Fast runner, and very good at running in crowded places. Can climb trees, and swing on branches. Weapon**: BI Axe Flaws: Mood swings at mad moments. Falls asleep when there's nothing to do. Has a weird laugh. Clumsy. Likes to talk a lot Powers: Can speak telepathically to all humans and animals. It's one way, so she can't read minds. Doesn't feel tired after. Happens consistently. Life Before CN*: Crystal lived on a tropical South American deserted island at the age of 6 because her father, Joseph, couldn't take care of her and her talents. Crystal had supplies and all from signaling passing ships. She eventually decided this isn't the right place for her to be and set off to a journey. Crystal got to Brazil at the age of 10 and got taken in by some guys who beat, raped, and abused her. She almost died, but survived by Escaping to Camp Norse. RP Example*: As I looked up I saw Pumpkin on my chest,looking in my eye. I ask him, Are you hungry? Go to your dish if you are. and he does so. I get up and fall unexpectedly on the floor. I laugh, making sure no one would hear my noise. After I feed him I go outside and talk to all of nature. Any notes about your characters: She's always wanted a boyfriend who doesn't abuse her.
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CynicalSkin Elite Moderator
Posts : 497 Join date : 2012-02-19 Age : 26 Location : HOGWARTS
| Subject: Re: Crystal Mercer Wed Apr 04, 2012 8:44 pm | |
| How often can she use her telepathic powers? | |
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thepapster Newb
Posts : 13 Join date : 2012-02-28 Age : 27 Location : U.S.A
| Subject: Re: Crystal Mercer Thu Apr 05, 2012 7:34 pm | |
| Whenever she wants, it's a constant thing. | |
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CynicalSkin Elite Moderator
Posts : 497 Join date : 2012-02-19 Age : 26 Location : HOGWARTS
| Subject: Re: Crystal Mercer Thu Apr 05, 2012 7:53 pm | |
| How long, and how much energy does it consume? Aka; does it make her tired, drowsy, other problems? | |
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thepapster Newb
Posts : 13 Join date : 2012-02-28 Age : 27 Location : U.S.A
| Subject: Re: Crystal Mercer Thu Apr 05, 2012 8:14 pm | |
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CynicalSkin Elite Moderator
Posts : 497 Join date : 2012-02-19 Age : 26 Location : HOGWARTS
| Subject: Re: Crystal Mercer Thu Apr 05, 2012 9:20 pm | |
| Please review what I just said about time and efficiency about the powers, then edit | |
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thepapster Newb
Posts : 13 Join date : 2012-02-28 Age : 27 Location : U.S.A
| Subject: Re: Crystal Mercer Thu Apr 05, 2012 9:46 pm | |
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CynicalSkin Elite Moderator
Posts : 497 Join date : 2012-02-19 Age : 26 Location : HOGWARTS
| Subject: Re: Crystal Mercer Sun Apr 08, 2012 8:55 pm | |
| Well, not getting tired from it is a Gary sue trait so please change that. | |
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thepapster Newb
Posts : 13 Join date : 2012-02-28 Age : 27 Location : U.S.A
| Subject: Re: Crystal Mercer Fri Apr 20, 2012 6:47 pm | |
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thepapster Newb
Posts : 13 Join date : 2012-02-28 Age : 27 Location : U.S.A
| Subject: Re: Crystal Mercer Mon Apr 30, 2012 10:59 am | |
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CynicalSkin Elite Moderator
Posts : 497 Join date : 2012-02-19 Age : 26 Location : HOGWARTS
| Subject: Re: Crystal Mercer Thu May 10, 2012 2:31 pm | |
| - BloodyBaron wrote:
- Well, not getting tired from it is a Gary sue trait so please change that.
^^^^^^^ Please don't double post, plus I gave you what you needed to edit. | |
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Rue Moderator
Posts : 420 Join date : 2012-02-25 Age : 26 Location : Massachusetts
| Subject: Re: Crystal Mercer Thu May 10, 2012 4:36 pm | |
| I'd like to point out, my character has the telepathic power, and it was approved. | |
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CynicalSkin Elite Moderator
Posts : 497 Join date : 2012-02-19 Age : 26 Location : HOGWARTS
| Subject: Re: Crystal Mercer Thu May 10, 2012 11:44 pm | |
| Drew, this isn't your character form and I was not talking about the telepathic power. I was talking about the Mary-Gary sue trait it has which is "not getting tired after use." This is none of your concern. | |
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