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PostSubject: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptyFri Mar 30, 2012 11:33 pm

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Name: Crystal Mercer
Age: 18
Gender: Female
Eyes: Dark Blue
Hair: Light Brown
Height: 5'8
Body Type: Curvy
Skin Color: Olive
Norse God Parent: Tree
Mortal Parent: Joseph Mercer
Country of Origin: Norway
Pets: Pumpkin the Kitty
Talents: Good flexibility. Smart. Fast runner, and very good at running in crowded places. Can climb trees, and swing on branches.
Weapon**: BI Axe
Flaws: Mood swings at mad moments. Falls asleep when there's nothing to do. Has a weird laugh. Clumsy. Likes to talk a lot
Powers: Can speak telepathically to all humans and animals. It's one way, so she can't read minds. Doesn't feel tired after. Happens consistently.
Life Before CN*: Crystal lived on a tropical South American deserted island at the age of 6 because her father, Joseph, couldn't take care of her and her talents. Crystal had supplies and all from signaling passing ships. She eventually decided this isn't the right place for her to be and set off to a journey. Crystal got to Brazil at the age of 10 and got taken in by some guys who beat, raped, and abused her. She almost died, but survived by Escaping to Camp Norse.
RP Example*: As I looked up I saw Pumpkin on my chest,looking in my eye. I ask him, Are you hungry? Go to your dish if you are. and he does so. I get up and fall unexpectedly on the floor. I laugh, making sure no one would hear my noise. After I feed him I go outside and talk to all of nature.
Any notes about your characters: She's always wanted a boyfriend who doesn't abuse her.


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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptyWed Apr 04, 2012 8:44 pm

How often can she use her telepathic powers?
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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptyThu Apr 05, 2012 7:34 pm

Whenever she wants, it's a constant thing.
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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptyThu Apr 05, 2012 7:53 pm

How long, and how much energy does it consume? Aka; does it make her tired, drowsy, other problems?
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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptyThu Apr 05, 2012 8:14 pm

Nope.
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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptyThu Apr 05, 2012 9:20 pm

Please review what I just said about time and efficiency about the powers, then edit
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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptyThu Apr 05, 2012 9:46 pm

Ok done
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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptySun Apr 08, 2012 8:55 pm

Well, not getting tired from it is a Gary sue trait so please change that.
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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptyFri Apr 20, 2012 6:47 pm

I'm I good now?
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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptyMon Apr 30, 2012 10:59 am

Can I be approved?
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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptyThu May 10, 2012 2:31 pm

BloodyBaron wrote:
Well, not getting tired from it is a Gary sue trait so please change that.

^^^^^^^ Please don't double post, plus I gave you what you needed to edit.
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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptyThu May 10, 2012 4:36 pm

I'd like to point out, my character has the telepathic power, and it was approved.
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PostSubject: Re: Crystal Mercer   Crystal Mercer EmptyThu May 10, 2012 11:44 pm

Drew, this isn't your character form and I was not talking about the telepathic power. I was talking about the Mary-Gary sue trait it has which is "not getting tired after use." This is none of your concern.
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